Hi David.
Congrats on the work to date.
Some minor things I have noticed:
In article 2; should we use the word 'independant' rather than 'independance'?
Article 6 appears to be missing? Or have I overlooked it?
Are we using an 'Americanised' spelling of Honourary?
Can we get a proposal in terms of the composition of the guiding 'Senate'?
Again Dave, thanks for your work to date. With something like this, it's more a case of the journey of a million miles starts with one step...!
J.
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